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Zellix
Zellix
A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Sep 10 2011, 1:53 PM EDT | Post edited: Sep 10 2011, 1:53 PM EDT
A shape sped through the trees, with a light thumping as it moved across the wet ground from the night before's rainfall. It stopped when it came upon a mother loner and her two kits. It watched through the bushes as one of the two kits crept closer, not knowing that death lurked within a tail-length. Right before it reached the bush, the shape tackled the kit with full force and stood over it. The kit had taken the hit full on and had left this world. The mother cat looked in anguish as her son lay motionless and her daughter looked at the cat questioningly. The shape snarled before leaping for the kit, doing the same damage. The she-cat tried to reach the exit, saving herself, but the cat was too fast for her. It hooked onto her haunches as cries of pain escaped the mother cat. It drug her away to rejoin her kits...

Warfrost was patrolling the borders of SummerClan and SpringClan when the familiar tinge of blood caught his nostrils. Upon searching the path he was on, he found the bodies of two kits and a mother lying motionless. Then, he noticed that he his own paws were caked in crusted blood. His eyes widened as he heard motion from all directions. 5  out of 5 found this valuable. Do you?    
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Zellix
Zellix
1. RE: A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Sep 11 2011, 1:59 PM EDT | Post edited: Sep 11 2011, 1:59 PM EDT
Warfrost tried to scrape the blood off of his claws. He hadn't done this! Had he?! He paused as he heard a cat nearing him, but which direction was it coming from? Do you find this valuable?    
tyklaw
tyklaw
2. RE: A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Sep 15 2011, 7:29 PM EDT | Post edited: Sep 15 2011, 7:29 PM EDT
That is awesome. You need to write more! Do you find this valuable?    
Zellix
Zellix
3. RE: A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Sep 15 2011, 9:03 PM EDT | Post edited: Sep 15 2011, 9:03 PM EDT
(Haa thanks! :) It was supposed to be a roleplay thread buuuut I guess not :/) Do you find this valuable?    

~LoveAngel~
4. RE: A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Oct 1 2011, 1:46 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 1 2011, 1:46 PM EDT
(If you still want to roleplay i will).
A ginger shecat from summerclan apeared from the lush forest trees. She stepped in the blood and backed away an inch. She took in the scene, then noticed the cat before her. She narrowed her eyes, "Did you do this", she snarled. Her tail lashing vicously behind her! Do you find this valuable?    

s.k.o
5. RE: A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Oct 13 2011, 6:52 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 13 2011, 6:52 PM EDT
"(If you still want to roleplay i will).
A ginger shecat from summerclan apeared from the lush forest trees. She stepped in the blood and backed away an inch. She took in the scene, then noticed the cat before her. She narrowed her eyes, "Did you do this", she snarled. Her tail lashing vicously behind her!"
a dark orange tom with water blue eyes stepped into the scene .he narrowed his eyes and said with curiosity'hello, i supose u 2 did this"he says with eyes looking scared but confident "these were my kits and mate! how could u do this they may have not been clan cats but still!"he slowly slids his sharp claws out and says"you'll pay i'll kill you!" Do you find this valuable?    

s.k.o
6. RE: A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Oct 13 2011, 7:01 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 13 2011, 7:01 PM EDT
"a dark orange tom with water blue eyes stepped into the scene .he narrowed his eyes and said with curiosity'hello, i supose u 2 did this"he says with eyes looking scared but confident "these were my kits and mate! how could u do this they may have not been clan cats but still!"he slowly slids his sharp claws out and says"you'll pay i'll kill you!""
"I am sunleaf from fallclan" he tacles the tom and bites down on his shoulder ,he tastes blood and lets go of him and stares menacingly at the she-cat he looks back at the tom still on the floor and slashes him one the throat were blood flows out endlessly. he stares at the tom while the toms body goes limp.then says with grief"i'm sorry but you had to die"then stares at the she-cat and says "dont tell anyone about this or i'll kill you" then runs back to his territory.
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s.k.o
7. RE: A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Oct 13 2011, 7:09 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 13 2011, 7:09 PM EDT
""I am sunleaf from fallclan" he tacles the tom and bites down on his shoulder ,he tastes blood and lets go of him and stares menacingly at the she-cat he looks back at the tom still on the floor and slashes him one the throat were blood flows out endlessly. he stares at the tom while the toms body goes limp.then says with grief"i'm sorry but you had to die"then stares at the she-cat and says "dont tell anyone about this or i'll kill you" then runs back to his territory.
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sunleaf "i cant stop thinking about that she-cat"sunleaf says to himself."i might've killed that cat if he didn't get any help"grief hit him those were his kits and mate, he was going to check on them when he saw that tom with blood on his paws his attention drew back to the she-cat, she was very pretty he suddenly felt attracted to her and wanted to see her but he had just attacked a cat in front of her. he closes his eyes and thinks of that she-cat Do you find this valuable?    

~LoveAngel~
8. RE: A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Oct 13 2011, 8:18 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 13 2011, 8:18 PM EDT
Meanwhile, Desertflower hadn't moved from where she was. She stared at the body of the tom, her eyes clouded with concern…. What if he hadn't killed those cats… She laid beside the dead?, tom. She didn't know him, but at least he deserved to be mourned. She did however think about Sunleaf. he was very strong and protective, and well… kind of handsome as well. Do you find this valuable?    

quartztail
9. RE: A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Nov 7 2011, 6:49 AM EST | Post edited: Nov 7 2011, 6:49 AM EST
Phoenixfeather had lost her border patrol and her eyes widened in shock. She saw the cats crowded around the mother and her kits and examined the scene.
There were three dead cats lying on the mossy earth. She sniffed the air, trying to scent another cat for she knew that none of these cats would have activity in such a terrible murder. Phoenixfeather hadn't been noticed by the cats until she finally scented a different cat. She couldn't tell which clan he or she was from but this scent had blood and fear stuck with it. "Who could it be?....."she spoke softly to herself. Until now she hadn't noticed the large puddle of blood that soaked her paws. She looked again at the mother, her kits and the grieving cats. She felt pulled in the puddle of grief.
(lol, I join every interesting thread i see! Don't I? XD) Do you find this valuable?    

~LoveAngel~
10. RE: A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Nov 7 2011, 7:48 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 7 2011, 7:48 PM EST
(yeah! you do.)

Desertflower looked at the newcomer, "It's so sad", she mewed. Do you find this valuable?    
Shyfyre
Shyfyre
11. RE: A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Nov 8 2011, 11:57 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 8 2011, 11:57 PM EST
Opium, a golden tom with a white mask, and belly smelled the tang of blood in the air. Driven by instinct, he dashed to the scene, pelt bristling, his black ringed tail flicking in greeting to the she-cats. The loner watched them catiously through bright blue eyes. "What happened?" he growled, shaking his head in disdain Do you find this valuable?    

~LoveAngel~
12. RE: A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Nov 9 2011, 7:22 AM EST | Post edited: Nov 9 2011, 7:22 AM EST
Desertflower looked at the loner sadly, "There was another cat here, with some of these bodies... Then a tom came and killed that cat, then he ran off. And now im here, then some other cats showed up", she mewed. Do you find this valuable?    
Shyfyre
Shyfyre
13. RE: A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Nov 9 2011, 9:32 AM EST | Post edited: Nov 9 2011, 9:32 AM EST
He growled, flicking his tail angrily, "How dare they... Kits and a Queen..." he mewed, surveying the mess Do you find this valuable?    

~LoveAngel~
14. RE: A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Nov 9 2011, 6:46 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 9 2011, 6:46 PM EST
Desertflower nodded, "So where are they from", she asked, "They deserve a proper burial". Do you find this valuable?    
Shyfyre
Shyfyre
15. RE: A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Nov 9 2011, 6:49 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 9 2011, 6:49 PM EST
"I don't know..." he mewed, flicking his tail disdainfully, "I'm not one with the clans, so I really don't know..." Do you find this valuable?    

~LoveAngel~
16. RE: A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Nov 9 2011, 6:52 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 9 2011, 6:52 PM EST
"Oh right", shemewed embaressed, "I should of known from your scent". Do you find this valuable?    
Shyfyre
Shyfyre
17. RE: A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Nov 9 2011, 7:02 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 9 2011, 7:02 PM EST
"It's fine..." he mewed, "Which one are you from? Are they from yours?" Do you find this valuable?    

~LoveAngel~
18. RE: A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Nov 10 2011, 6:27 AM EST | Post edited: Nov 10 2011, 6:27 AM EST
"I don't think so", she mewed. Do you find this valuable?    
Shyfyre
Shyfyre
19. RE: A Killer Among Us (Mountain Clans!)
Nov 10 2011, 10:09 AM EST | Post edited: Nov 10 2011, 10:09 AM EST
He sat down, gazing at the she-cat, "I wonder why they would kill someone..." Do you find this valuable?    
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