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Broken Love
Sep 14 2011, 4:34 PM EDT
Dapplescar turned, his glorious golden coat gleaming in the sunlight. From where she was perched beside the darkness of VenomClan's First Road. He was so handsome... but so deadly in every which way. Owltalon padded towards them, his venom-green eyes glinting in the half-light. His dark brown tabby fur fit perfectly on his ripped muscles, and Wolfshade, the gray tabby she-cat, asked, "What are you doing here, Owltalon?" But Owltalon walked past Wolfshade and lunged at Dapplescar. Wolfshade knew what this battle was called: the love battle. Together, the two toms fought over the love of Wolfshade. She screamed, "Stop! Stop!" Wolfshade hooked her claws into Dapplescar's pelt and pulled him off Owltalon. "No!" Dapplescar yowled, pulling and struggling. "Please, Dapplescar, stop," Wolfshade pleaded. Then she turned to Owltalon. "Owltalon, we can never be together," she said, her heart in her throat.
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Firestorm100 |
1. RE: Broken Love
Sep 14 2011, 4:51 PM EDT
Indigomoon watched in horror at the commotion. She hoped her silver pelt wouldn't show in the tree since her heart raced loud enough to draw attention to herself. Her dark blue eyes intensely glanced at the three cats waiting to see what would happen.
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tyklaw |
2. RE: Broken Love
Sep 15 2011, 5:23 PM EDT
Owltalon hissed at Wolfshade, snarling, "You know nothing about Dapplescar!" "What do you mean?" Wolfshade asked, horrifed. "He means nothing," Dapplescar meowed softly, trying to guide Wolfshade into the First Path. "No, you must listen!" Owltalon leaped in front of the cats, his green eyes flashing with anger. "Remember little Vinepaw? How he died in the woods?" Owltalon meowed. "Yes. A passing loner killed him," Dapplescar said quickly. "No, I saw what happened. Vinepaw was just sitting in a mud puddle, lapping up the last of the water, when Dapplescar raced forward, sank his fangs into the poor apprentice's neck, and shook hard until Vinepaw was dead."
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3. RE: Broken Love
Sep 15 2011, 5:28 PM EDT
Indigomoon's eyes widened in shock. She stepped backwards prepared to run, when her foot slipped. She landed on the ground. She quickly got up not wanting to imagine what the cats would do if they saw her.
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4. RE: Broken Love
Sep 15 2011, 8:07 PM EDT
"What was that?" Dapplescar asked, ears flicking. Wolfshade heard it too: a small thud. "That way," mouthed Owltalon, bending low. Dapplescar followed, and Wolfshade kept thinking about Vinepaw: the cat she'd loved, the cat she'd think would have a good life... maybe even father of their kits, or even Vinestar... But then she saw the frightened shape of a silver she-cat with dark blue eyes. Turning, Wolfshade saw that Dapplescar and Owltalon had seen her too. "I'll kill her," Dapplescar hissed. "No!" Owltalon snarled, lunging forward and pinning Dapplescar down. Wolfshade turned and stared at the she-cat, and she said, "Run! I hear a VenomClan patrol coming!"
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Firestorm100 |
5. RE: Broken Love
Sep 16 2011, 7:02 PM EDT
Indigomoon ran and only glanced back once before darting into another tree. * what just happened?* she asked herself.
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6. RE: Broken Love
Sep 17 2011, 6:29 PM EDT
Wolfshade saw the she-cat turn and glance back, and dart into another tree. The warrior turned and saw her father, Stripedbird, an apprentice called Darkpaw, and a she-cat called Lightningclaw. "What's wrong? We heard screaming," Lightningclaw panted, her long tabby fur bristling. "Wolfshade, are you hurt?" inturrupted Stripedbird, a dark bluish tabby tom, licked Wolfshade's head. "No," Wolfshade answered quickly. At the warrior's den, her thoughts drifted to the she-cat. She needed to find this she-cat, and ask her what she was doing in her territory. But, Wolfshade thought that she needn't to fight the silver tabby.
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Firestorm100 |
7. RE: Broken Love
Sep 17 2011, 9:58 PM EDT
Her heart pounded against her chest rapidly. Her mind swirled with regret for witnessing what she just saw, anger for the apprentice who was murdered, compassion for the she-cat, and loneliness... for herself. She sighed and dared to glance at the cats farther away.
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tyklaw |
8. RE: Broken Love
Sep 18 2011, 4:10 PM EDT
Moonlight poured in the forest. Wolfshade sniffed, belly fur touching the dark grass as she followed the scent trail. Wolfshade's blue eyes reflected in the moonlight. Cold air bit her nose and pads. She outstretched her claws and climbed a tree. The branches swayed once she saw the silver she-cat, her back turned to Wolfshade. Wolfshade flicked her tail and lunged forward, her paws grabbing the she-cat by the shoulders. "Who are you?" Wolfshade hissed. The she-cat's dark blue eyes were full of fear. Wolfshade repeated herself, and the she-cat gulped and began to explain.
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Firestorm100 |
9. RE: Broken Love
Sep 18 2011, 9:31 PM EDT
" Indigomoon.." she hissed as she threw Wolfshade of of her.
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tyklaw |
10. RE: Broken Love
Sep 18 2011, 9:52 PM EDT
Wolfshade's claws dug into the branch, and she hissed, "I'd watch it, if I were you, rogue." Indigomoon snarled, back arched, eyes dark pools of hate. "You have a warrior's name," Wolfshade observed. Indigomoon nodded, and replied through clenched teeth, "The tom Dapplescar is a murder." "I know that," Wolfshade sneered at her, but she sighed and hung her head. "I loved him," Wolfshade mumbled. Indiomoon stood still on the branch, and Wolfshade noticed that she was thin and lean, not muscled and long-legged like the Outcast Clan cats. "What Clan are you from?" Wolfshade asked.
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11. RE: Broken Love
Sep 18 2011, 9:56 PM EDT
" What concern is it of yours?" she snapped. Though underweight, she could still claw someone's fur out. Her features were also stunning. Her silver pelt seemed to swirl around her frame as her dark blue eyes gleamed. She couldn't tell anyone why she was here.
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12. RE: Broken Love
Sep 19 2011, 1:49 PM EDT
Wolfshade arched her back, ready to claw some sense into this cat, and she snarled, "Gee, could it be because you're on MY territory?" Indigomoon turned, pelt bristled. She knew that Wolfshade was a she-cat, and that she wouldn't fall for Indigomoon's beauty. Wolfshade, as well, was a pretty she-cat. Her long, gray tabby fur fit perfectly on her. Her moon-blue eyes gleamed, and her white chest and paws looked as soft and downy as a fawn's belly. But Wolfshade was deadly. And she wanted to know why this strange cat was on her territory... before she sent VenomClan to come and kill her.
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13. RE: Broken Love
Sep 19 2011, 3:49 PM EDT
A handsome tom with a smoke grey pelt looked up at the two she-cats. " Now don't get into a fight!" he snapped. His face filled with shock and joy when he saw Indigomoon. " My sister!" he purred as he darted up the tree. Indigomoon nuzzled him. " Onyxscar.. my dear brother.." this is what she was looking for. She returned her attention to Wolfshade.
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14. RE: Broken Love
Sep 19 2011, 6:06 PM EDT
"Onyxscar...?" Wolfshade echoed, confused. Why was he here? "Who are you?" mewed Onyxscar, his bright green eyes full of love and anger. "I am Wolfshade. I saved your sister from injury and possible death," Wolfshade informed, feeling proud of herself. Indigomoon fluffed out her fur and snarled, "I can take care of myself!" Onyxscar shook his head and asked his sister, "Why did you leave?" "What Clan are you from?" Wolfshade pleaded. Suddenly she turned and saw Owltalon sitting beside her. "I found Onyxscar," Owltalon explained. Feeling safer now, Wolfshade repeated her question. All eyes turned to Onyxscar.Do you find this valuable? |
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15. RE: Broken Love
Sep 19 2011, 7:41 PM EDT
" I left for the same reason he probally left... to find each other. Ever since our mother died, we each parted into seperate ways. But I had to see him."she mewed looking at Wolfshade intensly. Onyxscar nodded in agreement. " It's true." his gaze locked with Wolfshade's. His calm green gaze fixed on her blue one.
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16. RE: Broken Love
Sep 19 2011, 8:31 PM EDT
Wolfshade saw an eye of each color: green and blue. For a moment, Wolfshade was lost. It was hard to breathe. But Owltalon touched her shoulder with his tail, and she breathed in deeply. "I suppose we should help you get back to your Clan?" Owltalon mewed. Wolfshade admired the way he instently took charge, and Onyxscar nodded and stepped aside. Together, the four cats slid down the tree and walked north. Indigomoon walked behind, and took pace with Onyxscar. Wolfshade wondered if she was right to trust them.
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17. RE: Broken Love
Sep 19 2011, 8:35 PM EDT
Indigomoon drew Onyxscar back with her to whisper something in his ear. She too was having second thoughs about the two cats. Onyxscar gently rested his tail on Indigomoon's shoulder. Though he was talking to his sister, he couldn't get Wolfshade out of his mind.
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